A little different than what I’ve read from you in the past, but same quality nonetheless! It draws from many preexisting ghost stories (the legend of Sleepy Hollow in particular comes to mind) while still managing to feel original with its first person pov. You’ve truly captured the style of the old cautionary legend here, from the eerie rhyme at the beginning to the ending featuring a fate worse than death. Chilling indeed!
Curiosity killed the Smarmerton. I like how all the victims become statues, like trophies for the ghost. Awesome story, Josh.
A little different than what I’ve read from you in the past, but same quality nonetheless! It draws from many preexisting ghost stories (the legend of Sleepy Hollow in particular comes to mind) while still managing to feel original with its first person pov. You’ve truly captured the style of the old cautionary legend here, from the eerie rhyme at the beginning to the ending featuring a fate worse than death. Chilling indeed!
I think you should have used the photo of the Crim Dell…. 😉… I love that you wrote this.
I guess I'll have to take one and swap it out 🤷♂️
Only if you want to… this one is great!