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That sounds like a great start to something.

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Thanks, Ben. Only time will tell, I suppose...

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You set up some very nice anticipation in a short piece!

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Thanks very much. This one took some work to keep it at 100 words, so I'm glad it had the desired effect.

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Love the language in this.

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Thanks, man. I appreciate it 🙏

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This is a First Prize winner, if you ask me. Josh Tatter understands the genre and masters the language.

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Wow, thanks so much! Very glad you enjoyed it.

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Wow. Incredibly done. The atmosphere was really vivid and done with so few carefully chosen words.

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Carefully chosen is right 😅

I had to cut A LOT to keep it at 100 words.

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The rest of the word were simply not necessary. You kept only what was needed for a complete, compelling story.

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