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Big fan of the Moon Clerics! I found them really unsettling and untrustworthy, which added an eeriness to the story. Good luck in the Lunar Awards sir ⚔️

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Some excellent world-building here!

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I was afraid I had gone a little light on the world-building so I appreciate you saying that 🙏

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Love that bitter sweet ending of her waking and him missing. Well done and good luck in the Lunar Awards!

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Thanks, man! I'm so glad you liked it. I originally had planned on finishing the story with him dying, but then I realized this would be a much more effective ending.

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Thanks so much 🙏

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