Inside the fire.
Hardened men ride with grit in their hearts,
And pistols hanging heavy on their hips.
A war is coming.
A beautiful belle, once common whore,
Is stolen away from the man she loves.
The ex-Confederate rallies allies and friends,
When a friend and two fiends are found dead at his door.
With prayers on their tongues and righteous vengeance in their hearts,
They prepare for the fight and board the first train to River City.
Clash with the Regulars, caught by surprise!
Bullet to the gut and ole one-eye dies!
With Rebel yells and Comanche shrieks!
Gunshot and blade sees the blood seep!
Now reunited are Caroline and Everett,
But does that mean an end to the conflict?
No.
In the timeless words of Mugatu, "Dear God, it's beautiful!"
Never mess with wests true love
This dame aint no cooing dove
Rather she's a red hawk circling high in the sky
Down she'll dive with screeching cry
and those who sought to cage her will
surely die.
I can see this as a great ending scene to a movie complete with song. Good stuff. Also ❤️Steffany Gretzinger.
That's exactly how I imagined it myself when I wrote the ending. I tend to think in cinematic terms when I write, and closing scenes in movies, with the right music attached, can leave a very powerful impression.
Hardened men ride with grit in their hearts,
And pistols hanging heavy on their hips.
A war is coming.
A beautiful belle, once common whore,
Is stolen away from the man she loves.
A war is coming.
The ex-Confederate rallies allies and friends,
When a friend and two fiends are found dead at his door.
A war is coming.
With prayers on their tongues and righteous vengeance in their hearts,
They prepare for the fight and board the first train to River City.
A war is coming.
Clash with the Regulars, caught by surprise!
Bullet to the gut and ole one-eye dies!
A war is coming.
With Rebel yells and Comanche shrieks!
Gunshot and blade sees the blood seep!
A war is coming.
Now reunited are Caroline and Everett,
But does that mean an end to the conflict?
No.
A war is coming.
In the timeless words of Mugatu, "Dear God, it's beautiful!"
Never mess with wests true love
This dame aint no cooing dove
Rather she's a red hawk circling high in the sky
Down she'll dive with screeching cry
and those who sought to cage her will
surely die.
I can see this as a great ending scene to a movie complete with song. Good stuff. Also ❤️Steffany Gretzinger.
That's exactly how I imagined it myself when I wrote the ending. I tend to think in cinematic terms when I write, and closing scenes in movies, with the right music attached, can leave a very powerful impression.