Thanks so much, man. I'm not usually one to subvert expectations, but I liked the idea of Caroline using her feminine wiles to take matters into her own hands.
At first I thought Randall was quite stupid (he still might be) but his experience with Caroline would never lead him to think her capable of it, at least that's my reading of it. The consequences seem to make her position worse too. Looking forward to more 😁
Haha, I've had the exact same thought about Randall. There are times where I'm thinking, "Man, this guy is pretty dumb. Why would he do this?" But, in this instance, you're reading of the situation is spot on.
Yay, he's back! Good thing there's two! Keep em coming!
Yes! I figured I'd kept my adoring public in suspense for long enough! And it's looking like Part 5 will be the end of this particular story.
A five parter! Classic. Will get to part 4 later. Nice work Josh!
Brilliant! Good cliffhangers, pulpy fight scenes. Caroline and Randall was great too.
Thanks so much, man. I'm not usually one to subvert expectations, but I liked the idea of Caroline using her feminine wiles to take matters into her own hands.
At first I thought Randall was quite stupid (he still might be) but his experience with Caroline would never lead him to think her capable of it, at least that's my reading of it. The consequences seem to make her position worse too. Looking forward to more 😁
Haha, I've had the exact same thought about Randall. There are times where I'm thinking, "Man, this guy is pretty dumb. Why would he do this?" But, in this instance, you're reading of the situation is spot on.
What an ending! I need more
I'm so glad the suspense is working! I'm already writing the next part (in my head), and I tentatively plan to have it done next week.
Louis L’Amour and Zane Grey live again! Great job, Josh. And, yes, as Dan’s observed, you’ve mastered those “Perils of Pauline” cliffhangers.
Whew, that's high praise, man. I'm flattered.
Great stuff as usual, Josh but, man, and I know it’s the whole point of serials, you need to stop ending your stories on cliffhangers! 😠😆
Haha, I'm just trying to make sure you come back for more!
There’s no worries there 😁