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That was great Josh 👍🏼

Really loved how the dialogue between the characters barrelled along and set the scene perfectly

If you’re writing keeps up at the same pace, I’ll be looking forward to the next instalment round about Friday! 😁

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Haha, I can't make any promises, but I'm glad to know I'm doing something right!

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Bounty hunter without a star

arrested a depty who ran from afar

into the arms of the law to keep him safe

just his bad luck the hunter had his face

on a poster attached to a bounty.

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Great part. Can't wait for the next one. Peace

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Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll do my best to have Part 3 out sooner rather than later.

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