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Excellent story! I enjoyed it immensely. I loved the ending!

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I'm glad you liked it! This was one of my favorite stories to write, and I just love these characters. Be sure to check out the sequel:

https://joshtatter.substack.com/p/everett-brooks-and-the-dodge-city

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I started to, but got called away. I'll have to get back to it.

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This was such a good read!

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Thank you! I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed it. Make sure to read Everett and Caroline's next (mis)adventure:

https://joshtatter.substack.com/p/everett-brooks-and-the-dodge-city

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Thanks! I should probably subscribe too. :)

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Well, obviously 🤷‍♂️

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OH I LOVED THIS!! This was a great read Josh 🔥

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Thanks very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Be sure to check out the sequel:

https://joshtatter.substack.com/p/everett-brooks-and-the-dodge-city

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Saving it!

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I really enjoyed the shootout in the last chapter of the story (with the specificity of the weapons involved). And the prose was vivid and dynamic. I didn’t know the song you referenced here until I clicked the link. Very nice touch. 😊

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Thanks very much for the kinds words, Daniel! They mean a lot coming from a master storyteller such as yourself.

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Somehow, I didn’t get this in my inbox at the time Josh 🤔

Anyway, a great finish to a great story

Really well done 👍🏼

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I published it to web only since I finished it at the same time as Part 4.

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The circle is drawn full

The dance is done.

Sweet woman and hunter

track the dastard down.

There in a tub of water warm

The dame puts a shot in the evil 'un.

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Great story!!

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Thanks! I gave it my best shot.

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You can definitely turn this into a novel one day

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I am thinking about releasing it as an ebook.

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I would buy it! If you need a proof reader let me know

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