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Intense from beginning to end. The opening immediately had me hooked. Expertly written! Bravo!

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Thanks very much! I'd been wanting to write a car chase for a long time. I was inspired by Vincent Marshall's thrilling "We Blood" to finally hack it out.

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(Looks over his shoulder to make sure that the FBBS isn't watching him.)

Hell yeah! Kick Ass!

Good piece. Based as hell.

Keep up the good work, Bro!

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