(Claps) Nicely done, sir. The gritty detective and his plucky lover. I was holding my breath as the bullets flew in both pieces. You never know when one might get lucky. But then, the good detective ended the story by getting lucky.
Looking forward to the further adventures of Shepard Black
Also, still really impressed at how you write action scenes to make them so propulsive and fluid. When I try it, they come across like two old guys playing a game of domino’s 🙄😁
Going to give it another go in a story I’m writing just now, so any advice would be appreciated 👍🏼
Haha, I don't know that I'm qualified to give advice, but I'll give it a go!
Honestly, I just spend a lot of time visualizing how I want the action to play out, which is why some stories take longer than others. I also try to use as few words as necessary to get the point across so that everything a kinetic feeling to it. It is also my firm belief that the action should have a point. I don't believe in action for the sake of action.
At any rate, I hope this helps, and I appreciate your support!
Quite brutal.
You did it again, Josh. Well done! 👏
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Really goes well with the music. I can see the trailer in my mind's eye.
That's exactly what I'm going for when I include those needle drops.
(Claps) Nicely done, sir. The gritty detective and his plucky lover. I was holding my breath as the bullets flew in both pieces. You never know when one might get lucky. But then, the good detective ended the story by getting lucky.
Thanks so much, man! I aim to entertain.
You've got such a knack for choosing the coolest names
Great stuff again Josh 👍🏼
Looking forward to the further adventures of Shepard Black
Also, still really impressed at how you write action scenes to make them so propulsive and fluid. When I try it, they come across like two old guys playing a game of domino’s 🙄😁
Going to give it another go in a story I’m writing just now, so any advice would be appreciated 👍🏼
Haha, I don't know that I'm qualified to give advice, but I'll give it a go!
Honestly, I just spend a lot of time visualizing how I want the action to play out, which is why some stories take longer than others. I also try to use as few words as necessary to get the point across so that everything a kinetic feeling to it. It is also my firm belief that the action should have a point. I don't believe in action for the sake of action.
At any rate, I hope this helps, and I appreciate your support!
Thanks Josh. Really appreciate that. I’ll give it my best shot. And, if it’s rubbish, you can just type the word domino’s! in the comments section 😁