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It's a better intro to a love story than any harlequin romance in the last 40 years

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"He kept her Remington for the same reason." Great last line!

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Thanks, man! It was definitely a moment of divine inspiration when I came up with that, lol.

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More more describe her blood as a red sticky mess, where on body, where on clothes, the way body is laying, face up or in dirt, and MOST IMPORTANT expression on face as died. \ Lovely start.

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These are properly good stories Josh. Really enjoying them 👍🏼

Also, slightly jealous you can write them so fast! 😁

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Haha, thanks. This one took me about an hour or so. Not sure if that's "fast" for 100 words.

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